WHoa...this is so beautiful, so full of imagery and it just really blew me away. Keep it up! QueenVixta

if u wrote this so far back, why posting it only now?

Just beautifull, how you described the creatures so vividly and still managed to rhyme! I like Angels too. :)

It's nice. I really love your use of imagery. It would make a great conceptual film.

so sad and lovely...i especially liked the last two lines