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Reviews For: The Shadow Of Hell

Theory Of The 4th Dimension
2005-12-21
ch 1,
abuseReally cool! Especially loved the last three lines!
Manju
2005-05-06
ch 1,
abusehey. great job. i really like ur poems. this one has 2 mistakes though: line 6 "willbe" should be "will be" and the last line "miseryrests" should be "misery rests". i really like the line "love now leaving like the wind". great job once again! and thank you for your review. i know i took long to review back but i didn't see your review before.
Rebecca Kelsey
2005-02-07
ch 1,
abusewow, this shows lots of emotion. I love it. great imagrey.
simpleplan13
2005-02-07
ch 1,
abusewow.. i like it.. your missing some spaces though
Michael Kim
2005-02-07
ch 1,
abuseI really like that.

If you give the devil a lift

He’ll end up driving

Nice poems overall.
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