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| Theory Of The 4th Dimension 2005-12-21 ch 1, | abuseReally cool! Especially loved the last three lines! |
| Manju 2005-05-06 ch 1, | abusehey. great job. i really like ur poems. this one has 2 mistakes though: line 6 "willbe" should be "will be" and the last line "miseryrests" should be "misery rests". i really like the line "love now leaving like the wind". great job once again! and thank you for your review. i know i took long to review back but i didn't see your review before. |
| Rebecca Kelsey 2005-02-07 ch 1, | abusewow, this shows lots of emotion. I love it. great imagrey. |
| simpleplan13 2005-02-07 ch 1, | abusewow.. i like it.. your missing some spaces though |
| Michael Kim 2005-02-07 ch 1, | abuseI really like that. If you give the devil a lift He’ll end up driving Nice poems overall. |