I just found this story and I think it's quite remarakable. The characters are well developed and it has a great mystery. I also like that Rayne is not totally obsessed with the murders which lets for other things to happen while the story progresses. I would however like to see something romantic happen between her Sunjuin.

Oh! Wow, this is such an amazing story. I'm really sad that you've chosen to go on hiatus (if it's any consolation, a couple of stories that I view as my best work got NO reviews - I've now removed them from fp.com), and I really, really, REALLY want you to come back.

I'm so very eager to learn about what's really going on... do you think that you could perhaps upload something that clears up the customs of their land, and describe the different races that populate it? I'd really like to have a more in-depth summary of the history of the land (if you don't have one, never mind).

I don't know if this will have any effect on you, but... please, please come back. I really would like to read more of your work and I've already told most of my fp.com friends about your story.

Please?

Blessed be, Lily

wow, what's happening? what happened to the story. it makes no sense. which story goes first? and which secound?

what happened to the other story. are you going to with this story line? why?? the first 10 chapters were going so well too!! i really like your story so please update soon.

Hey this is a really good story!! You write really well and have practically no typos, which is pretty impressive in and of itself. There were a few places where I got confused, but that could just be me reading too fast. Keep up the good work and I'm sure you'll get more reviews!