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| Shinyfighter 2005-03-18 ch 1, | abuseWow...that's all that I can really say. I really loved the idea of the regular joe being something really special and important to this person. Excellent Beg/Mid/End and overall another great poem. :D |
| Legacy 2005-02-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is quite beautiful. It posesses wonderful metaphors and phrases.This line stood out to me especially"Your wings may not be made of feathers/But you stil know how to fly" Writing is one of the most important things in my life, I see that it is one of yours as well. "Sha'Aneleh - they danced with Fate"-Snake Charm Ja ne |
| Phoenix Lucy 2005-02-08 ch 1, | abuseAhh, has got a lot of thought in it, but the words are meaningless. I'm listening but I'm not hearing. |
| En Amor con Memoria 2005-02-07 ch 1, | abuseIt's amazing to have a friend like that, isn't it? Love the way you wrote it, comparing him/her to fairytales and such...very well done, and extremely sweet. I love friends like that...great poem. Keep writing! ~Em |
| Summerdazed 2005-02-07 ch 1, | abusethis is beautiful!! the words you used fit the poem perfectly. i especailly liked the second and third sentences in the first stanza. review me if you're free! =summerdazed= |