Beauitful...descripive and deicate, yet it seems storng, maydbe its not so deicate...amazing story,so many things thst overlap and distort, yet it wouldnt work other wise... I dont have much of an idea of what this could be about, time and and ignornce of it? No, thats to simple... What does it mean? Well, even with out knowing this is an amazing piece, you are very talented...So many twists,deep.Maybe several ideas that reflet each other...?

Thanks for reviewing my story! And I'm glad that it was able to inspire you to write your own.

Anyway, you've got a good story here. It's got a lot of good imagery in it and enough metaphors to keep me guessing for a while as to what it's really about.