Beautiful ending to this peice filled with desperation. I think you do a very nice job using couplets (somewhat couplets, and I cant spell today ha). Anyways...I love the imagery and the darkness that turns to a spark of hope at the end. So many can relate to this. Great piece. Bravo to you.

I almost cried , I know what it's like to feel that way. I'm glad I have Jesus to call out to cause He always comes to me and not a second to late

Deep inside dark soul,

Lives a sparkling ray of hope,

Fills all life with joy.

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We oft look outside,

Fail to see inner seed's bloom,

Spreading roses wide.

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in our memories,

we all walked on holy ways,

'til we stopped & stared.

Another great one, a hearts cry. Wonderful!