 Sarah-Brighteyes 2005-04-22 . chapter 1This poem reminds me of the feelings I went through after I saw the movie "Passion of the Christ." I remember wondering if i would have stood and wept as my savior was led away to die for me, or turned traitor, played a peter, should I say on that day. I dont know, but I do know your poem brought back those memories. Great write. Excellent flow. You have a very nice job with bringing about thoughts that lead to God and make people think. Bravo once again. |
 ta1nt3d1uv 2005-02-18 . chapter 1"I am scaredto be alone" you forgot a space
I like how you have it set up, although I'm somewhat amazed that it uploaded right since fictionpress's uploader is pure evil.
Very good :-) Keep up the good work |
 Thyrt 2005-02-10 . chapter 1yes it was interesting..but not a good poem? you've got to be kidding, i loved it |
 xxLuvoxx 2005-02-10 . chapter 1Loved it and the way the poem is positioned. Very nice. |
 suzieque2 2005-02-08 . chapter 1What if... a truly beautiful and thought provoking poem.I think this line "I crucify you all the time" reminds me of the Ray Boltz song... does he feel the pain again, each time I sin... am I crucifying him again... if he's in pain then I know I have to change etc... |