Nice. The indomitable Peter letting things get to him? This is impressive. And what's this love thing going on?!? THAT'S unexpected. Very cool twists you've had going on these past few chapters. Great job, as always. So brutaly realistic it's beautiful.

Best wishes,

~Ashley~

Interesting developments here...It brings up the question if either Carl or Peter will survive themselves...Onto the next chapter. Sorry I haven't been on in forever, and that I haven't reviewed.

Best wishes,

~Ashley~

That was a bit ** quick, only just finished that last one. Anyway freaky new chapter to be sure.

Couldn't quite make out the beggining unless it's meant to be about something that happened in an earlier book.

I'll check it out an see. Sneaky sod probably new that might happen. Still good writing as always.

Great new chapter, as always! It's a good new twist here, this emotional involvment, and the possibilty of Carl coming back. Wow. The whole male lover thing, that also is very interesting; I'm still not sure why/how he came to the conclusion that his lover was just another "lowlife"?I, as ever, love it. It's incredibley realistic and I'd forgotten how disturbingly well you write this. :) GREAT JOB!

** hell! you know how to play em don't ya. Great story with twist after twist and no way of really seeing at this point where you're going with it. I just know I'm going to keep an eye on it as the writing is so ** good!! 5*

This is a really good chapter. Definitely real and great new characters...Are they going to play a big part in this one? Who's the guy Kim shot? Anyone important?

Your story is gruesome realistic and sexually charged. Part of it had me blushing anyway, in a good way. LOL

EXCELLENT TRULY GRIPPING AND GLAD I READ IT.

READ ON A RECOMMENDATION BY THE WAY, SHAN'T SAY WHO, AS THEY ASKED ME NOT TO.

But DAMN!

"while what was left of his right eye socket, spewed pulped brain out where he lay twitching on the tarmac." What a truly delicious description! lol

Wonderfully done and what can I say Kim is one truly sick woman. From what I've read so far sounds to me like Peter has a reason to be concerned.

Aching for more...

Good beginning. This is familiar now. Kim's devious, isn't she? A good distraction ploy. I think it's going to be interesting to see how she and Peter/Carl get along in the future, with them on the same sides now...

Whoa, Kim's in now? Reading on...

A brilliant piece of writing. I was overwhelmed by the tense, suspenseful atmosphere throughout, not to mention the sexual charge which pervaded a depraved and ruthless scenario. You have really succeeded in entering into the warped minds of these truly grotesque characters, and still manage to retain a disturbingly beleivable humanity within them. Keep up the powerful work. You certainly have a great gift.

I must say this is powerfully stagerring stuff. This was awesome and compelling with no punches pulled. Makes me eagerly hungry for the next chapter.

Deeper & more involved than your prologue, but I suppose that was just setting the mood. This is steamy and sexy with a horrifying twist.

You have to continue with it! It would make a great bloody film..

Gripping, Horrifying & Utterly Compelling.

** Brilliant! Can't wait for more...

Oh giving us a taster - very good. Lovely little prologue - well you know what I mean. Oh it's too early for this... Anyway it's well written as ever, by wasting no time on describing the gore fest of the three bodies you emphasized the fact that they had been cut up all the more because it leaves everything to the reader's imagination. I'm going to be looking forward to the upcoming first chapter of this Torment :)