beautiful flow and message. great job.

I wish there was a different way for me to say this but again, beautiful. Romance at its best. I hope you become a poet one day, you have a gift for it.

This is a very sweet poem to write for someone. Truly captures the essence of love, excellent work.

Rocky :)

i liek it.. very nice.. thanks for your review I think.. i dont agree with your opinion and i dont think a review is how to express your opinion, but whatvs

that's nice...the rhyme goes with it...

tc and keep writing!

crysta

aw! that was so sweet..i use to feel like that about a guy..but uh..yeah things happen so ya know..that was really good

Good rhyme and rhythm, very sweet and very true :)

Good poem!

How sweet! I like it! Good job! okay, the way this is going I can just say etc and you can get the point. XDElli