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| Arutha 2005-03-07 ch 1,   | Wow, I really enjoyed that one. I particularly liked the part you repeated throughout; it flowed so eloquently ;P Anyhow, keep it up, darlin' |
| Aubrey Solenge 2005-03-04 ch 1, | Another excelent poem. Gosh, I love everything you do! I can see how its old, not quite your normal style. Still very godd, the repitition was great... shoot, the whole poem was great!! , Aubrey Solenge |
| Marth Azumi 2005-03-03 ch 1, | Heh, I was looking through your poems for ones I didn't review yet, and I came across this one. Anyway, I think it's really good. It has a good flow, and it just sounded so...real, like someone was pouring their heart out, releasing all the pain that they suffered through a long period of time. Really, really good job. \m/Marth\m/ |
| aquamoon222 2005-02-12 ch 1, | wow! That is really good! |