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| Aylae 2005-04-04 ch 1,  | abuseyou have a great way of writing. Just read your site, (on fictionpress) so now sort of a sorry in asking you in "stinging tears" about personal experience!! haha i dig myself into many many holes! well, just to say I LOVE your style and people who are happy can write angst, you do soo well, better than me!! (well that's easy!) haha but you're very talented!blessed be! --:-- |
| Somnia 2005-04-04 ch 1, | abuseI loved "Broken hands of Time". Its really a very effective image. I was very impressed by this as a whole in fact. WEll done. Somnia x |
| Opium Hex 2005-03-23 ch 1, | abuseWonderful :D By the way, you've reviewed my work as Ruby Woo...I won't be using that name any more, so check out OpiumHex...lots of new stuff :D |
| Emmytastic gal 2005-03-13 ch 1, | abusewhoa! thats unbelievable... the rhythm is perfect and the whole thing ties together to make a fantastic masterpiece... keep it up. check out my newest poem... thnx a bunch.write on...-Em |
| aquamoon222 2005-03-08 ch 1, | abuseThe ending was very likable, but I liked the stanza: "Why should I live here When across the line In the shadows of My mind Lies the deep dark recesses Of my idealism?" It's really deep. Amazing stuff right here, just amazing! |
| Marth Azumi 2005-02-25 ch 1, | abuseThis was pretty good as well. It was deep, and the metaphors were spot-on. Keep it up ^^ -Marth |
| Aubrey Solenge 2005-02-24 ch 1, | abuseWOW! I that was a good one. you write so well! i wish i had your talent. most of my stuff happens in math class^^ |
| Arutha 2005-02-17 ch 1, | abuseLol, your second author's note made me chuckle ;P I had to review this one because it has the exact same amount of words as my most recent post, hehe. The poem... was freaking awesome. I loved it and I really associate with it; I'm quite the dreamer - always in my head. Anyhow, really great poem; keep it up. |
| Sasquatcha 2005-02-08 ch 1, | abuseTiz purdy, lovely images and descriptions ^_^ |
| ffyona 2005-02-08 ch 1, | abuseyeah, i love your last line too! "the people of my kind will let me stay the night"... nice.the only criticism i have is that it's maybe a little long, a reader might lose interest? i think that's a personal thing though, i just like short poems, someone else might disagree. i also really like the line "...rings like the echoes of bells across my mind". you've got a knack for those little catchy lines that'll stay in a person's head for ages. good job! ffyonax |