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| Tigerwulf 2007-11-20 ch 1,  | abuseWhoa... I think werewolves rule and this so badly captured it for me! Nice set up as well... Awesome! Best line? Hmm... probably the 'Becoming one with the wolf' bit. S'great! 'wulf |
| Da Vinci at Work 2006-10-23 ch 1, | abuseDeep poetry you got there. I like how you set it up. This is definitely a very good poem. |
| Kitsune gone insane 2006-10-02 ch 1, | abusehey! nice poem!i am the author sean told ya about!my name is Courtney...lolanyway nice poem! |
| LightfootLee 2006-05-20 ch 1, | abuseI love just about everything that has Werewolves in it, and this one didn't dissapoint. I especially liked the lines "howling in a langauage unknown to me" and "Shadows fleeing from my wretched shadow". Well done. This poems point of view might be able to help me with my new story. thanks for the inspiration pal. |
| Dameavar 2005-05-15 ch 1, | abuseThis was really an amazing poem, because of the emotion and depth you put in to it. I really liked your word choice, and feeling, and I loved the way you started each little paragraph. The only thing that could have made this poem alot better, was that you should have extended the lines so it flowed a little better because even though it was outstanding it was a bit choppy. Good Poem. Keep Writing!P.S.- Ch. 5 of Red Eyes is up! R/R please.P.S.S.- Post the next chapter of Avalon Tre! I've been waiting to read it! -Dameavar- |
| gypsylass 2005-05-15 ch 1, | abusei like the last line!! great job |
| Alatariel313 2005-02-25 ch 1, | abuseSCARY! I like: "Golden rays set me free. . ." |
| o0oAnnie 2005-02-12 ch 1, | abuseGreat poem! I loved the last line..."Golden rays set me free" beautiful..I loved the structure of the poem as well, how each stanza started with one word then the sentence continued on the second line...it really made me feel like I now know what it feels like to become a werewolf...brilliant! :) |
| Bookworm12-8-90 2005-02-08 ch 1, | abuseeek!! *runs and hides from scary inda and shivers under the covers. after a while, she lifts the corner of the sheets* is it safe to come out now? |
| Shadows Fury 2005-02-08 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely love werewolves...this was well written and I like the style. Good use of words. Keep up the great work. ^_^ |
| InSilverShadows 2005-02-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseyay! Very nice, luff the descriptions. You write such awesome poetry, Inda! KEEP IT UP!! |