Whoa!

Positively great! I love the whole 'viewpoint of a werwolf'! This kind of scene is one of my favorite, because it's a classic...yet, your idea is so 'out-there' and timeless. You are definetly one of my favorite fantasy authors.

Also, I must praise you on how descriptive this poem is. It's title is an eye-catcher- yet again, as well is the description. You have a thing for this, most definetly. Keep up the amazing writing!

-AngelicSerenity

Whoa... I think werewolves rule and this so badly captured it for me! Nice set up as well... Awesome! Best line? Hmm... probably the 'Becoming one with the wolf' bit. S'great!

'wulf

Deep poetry you got there. I like how you set it up. This is definitely a very good poem.

hey! nice poem!i am the author sean told ya about!my name is Courtney...lolanyway nice poem!

I love just about everything that has Werewolves in it, and this one didn't dissapoint. I especially liked the lines "howling in a langauage unknown to me" and "Shadows fleeing from my wretched shadow". Well done. This poems point of view might be able to help me with my new story. thanks for the inspiration pal.

This was really an amazing poem, because of the emotion and depth you put in to it. I really liked your word choice, and feeling, and I loved the way you started each little paragraph. The only thing that could have made this poem alot better, was that you should have extended the lines so it flowed a little better because even though it was outstanding it was a bit choppy. Good Poem. Keep Writing!P.S.- Ch. 5 of Red Eyes is up! R/R please.P.S.S.- Post the next chapter of Avalon Tre! I've been waiting to read it!

-Dameavar-

i like the last line!! great job

SCARY! I like: "Golden rays set me free. . ."

Great poem! I loved the last line..."Golden rays set me free" beautiful..I loved the structure of the poem as well, how each stanza started with one word then the sentence continued on the second line...it really made me feel like I now know what it feels like to become a werewolf...brilliant! :)

eek!! *runs and hides from scary inda and shivers under the covers. after a while, she lifts the corner of the sheets* is it safe to come out now?

Absolutely love werewolves...this was well written and I like the style. Good use of words. Keep up the great work. ^_^

yay! Very nice, luff the descriptions. You write such awesome poetry, Inda! KEEP IT UP!!