The dialogue wasn't confusing-at least not for me. I actually liked this a lot. I can't quite put my finger on the reason. Maybe because it feels different somehow. Sorry, I'm not being very articulate. In any case, great job!

Nah--I love the dialogue! It wouldn't be the same with Derek/Kaz said.

I liked this, it had a simplistic style to it and the characters seemed so totally opposed that I couldn't help but grin. You're style doesn't need to have the 'he said' tag because it would make it tedious and overcomplicated.

Overall it is well written and the simplicity is the key to that.

I liked this a lot. The dialogue without the tags gives it sort of a surreal feel.Fluffy and slightly strange! My kind of fic!It's just a really good, interesting, fic, I guess. I liked it a bunch.

I'm a complete and utter angst-**, but there's nothing like that feeling you get after reading a wonderfully fluffy *sweet* story.

And right now, I've got that feeling ten times ten... *grins*

Love it! Within the next few days I'm sure I'll have read all of your other stories. I really like the style it this one, the repeating and all. It makes so... I don't have a word for it. Awesome job.

Nice. Very sweet.

I like this. Interesting, slightly different style. Sometimes it's confusing when a character says something with a pause in the middle and you start a new line when you technically shouldn't and this makes it more confusing. But it's good.

You should never apologize for the way you write a story. I really like your style-the dialogue in such a way is very interesting. ~Hali

I wasn't confused by the conversation without the tags. I do that myself in stories that I never finish. But I do it. ^_^

That was surprising wonderful. It was very...well I can't seem to find an adequate descriptor. But it was light hearted and...fun. It was very pleasing, good job.

j'ai vraiment adoré! je trouve que tu as une façon d'écrire vraiment agréable, les dialogues sont trés justes, bref, c'était parfait.. I really liked it!

Ah nice warm fuzzy feeling...

i like the style actualy, sometimes you get more mixed up with the 'kaz said' and stuff it's fun! i'll be reading more of your storis ^~ya ne!

Wow, that was good. This is the first story I have read of yours since December. It was good. The dialoque was fine. Sometimes its unnecessary to put all the "said"s in there.