   SayIt'sWrong 2005-04-08 . chapter 1A really good, strong piece of writing. I like it a lot, well written. QueenVixta |
 Cry Tears of Darkness 2005-02-12 . chapter 1wow, nicely put! |
 Neptune's daughter 2005-02-09 . chapter 1 They tried to help you but the didn’t see you crawlThey knew you fought but they never thought you’d fallHurts inside no scars to show.” ( Lene Marlin)
Neptune's daughter |
 Zodiacreborn 2005-02-08 . chapter 1People don't see what they think will hurt them, nice poem
-Zodiac |
 The System Mother 2005-02-08 . chapter 1Wow! Very powerful ^_^ Good work. |
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