I love the beginning and the end. Very well written poem. I like it a lot. QueenVixta

i like this as well. just presentation needs to be fixed. spacing and stanzas... or spacing at least ;)

Nice. Nice. I like da repeating in the end.

I love the part "you want to shout but words collapse in your mouth" great job.

great poem. beauty in the ungliness of truth.