wow...but u know, sometimes rambling reveals extrodonairy poetry and prose and the like...

** wow thats long! can i say: stanzas and single spacing would REALLY be appriciated. other than that, was nice. i can tell it was smthg u needed to get out of your system. nicely done!

Long and strong. XD That rhymed. 0_0;; Good work,

And thanks for the reviews!

Keep on trying... you have no other choice...

I do think is good. Rambling it's good it's makes you write with passion and so it gets to be good.

We are all desperate sometimes like you are one aganist the world... things look pretty wild ..."There is a light that never goes out" if you want I'd like to prove you that (in case you don't belived as destiny, waiting...)

"Si ayudo a una sola persona a tener esperanza, no habré vivido en vano."

Neptune's daughter.