another inspiring poem

this is so deep, so dark, so passionately sad... I'm so glad i've never had to deal with something like this. I never do either.

Once again, a beautiful poem. Amazing, I really have no words for something quite so real. I can really tell that this means something, and it shows in all you write. Well done!

~ Ethereal Kisses ~

Well expressed and nicely structured. Another very good work. My only suggestion here would be to go deeper and investigate different poetic devices like metaphors, allegory, imagery, etc. Very good work though.

Hey,I like this poem a lot. It totally relates to what Iw as going through a while back. Thanks for the review too!

Kati

I love the rhythm and the use of 'once upon a time', it really puts things in perspective. I can realate to this so well! Wonderful job!

The rhyming is really good, and the emotion in it is so strong.

Wow I love this, I can totally relate to this; poems are such a good way to get feelings down, I have a few like this, may post them someday... thanks for sharing x Weasel Within x

I loved the rhythm of this poem! It has really good flow. Deep meaning. Love it.

wow. this is great, I liked it a lot. especially how you use the phrase Once Upon a Time. it makes it seem like you want to pretend that it's not real. lovely job! once again thanks so much for reveiwing me again! (*dances* oh yeah I'm supposed to be writing a review... that's what blink-182'll do to you... hehe). thanks again and lovely job!

~leila*

Powerful and creative. I like it!

I really loved this poem because i could relate to it thenks!

That was beautiful, and i'm sorry i hurt you. I know this is about me! Luv ya! luv, Amy

wow, your poem is like mine wrote, but 10x better! good job =)

Has a really nice meaning to it.

Only problem is the rhyming seemed incosistent, unless its me who doesn't get the pattern...xD it also made it sound a bit too choppy.

I'm sure you have the ability to make it cooler =)