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Reviews For: Mourning
pandaluv11 2005-06-28 . chapter 1
Ha! That's so awesome!

Well, since you said I could interpret it in any way... it sounds like some terrible natural disaster occured. I know that's blunt but... like when the tsunami hit and 9-11 (even though that wasn't a natural disaster)... But just--something big that affects a lot of people I guess? I think you get it.

But that's what it made me think of. Like the world was coming to an end, or the destruction after a war. And you see all the sad people and it seems like the animals are crying too... and... I'm blabbering...

But good job! I liked it a lot!
SamiKismet 2005-02-08 . chapter 1
You expressed the feelings beautifully and the flow is kept at pace while revealing the true reason for the poem. Overall: Great job!
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