I freaking loved this! Great work.

that was a great story! Its taken me forever to read, and it took me a while to get into the story, but it was absolutly brilliant! I really did love it and im glad i stuck my way through it. Great job, and hope to read another of yours soon!

Isnt the gang and society supposed to be a 'secret and underground' society- not one intouch with the public and one that would never use public media to convey a message?

aww, they're getting to be so cute together.

wow what an ending. I wonder what exactly he wants with her', nice work

what a long long long ramble. i hope next chapter has a bit more understandable meat in it. =]

Fantastic story!
I absolutely loved it, through and through! Funny characters and a lot of drama!

Great story! I really appreciate that it was romantic and had a happy ending, but never went overboard with sex or anything like that (those stories freak me out)I'll probably be checking out your other stories!

Awesome fic. :) but what happened to Martin the little boy they saved?

Besides the fact that the ending is really cheesy... the story was really good. Not only was it original, it was beautifully written. I think you did a great job and I really liked the story.

:)

I really don't know what to say so I'll just leave it at that. :)

I bet Cali's pregnant.

That's pretty unexpected. Gideon and Christian brothers..

I guess that foils my 'get a boyfriend' plan...

How could Micheal be Cali's legal husband if he and his family is illegal?