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Katherine-the-greate
2008-04-21
ch 25,
abuseIsnt the gang and society supposed to be a 'secret and underground' society- not one intouch with the public and one that would never use public media to convey a message?
Katherine-the-greate
2008-04-21
ch 16,
abuseaww, they're getting to be so cute together.
Katherine-the-greate
2008-04-17
ch 2,
abusewow what an ending. I wonder what exactly he wants with her', nice work
Katherine-the-greate
2008-04-17
ch 1,
abusewhat a long long long ramble. i hope next chapter has a bit more understandable meat in it. =]
LoneRanger
2008-02-04
ch 42, anon.
abuseFantastic story!
I absolutely loved it, through and through! Funny characters and a lot of drama!
PiratePrincess16
2008-01-25
ch 42,
abuseGreat story! I really appreciate that it was romantic and had a happy ending, but never went overboard with sex or anything like that (those stories freak me out)I'll probably be checking out your other stories!
yayawhynot89
2007-12-14
ch 41,
abuseAwesome fic. :) but what happened to Martin the little boy they saved?
Gentle. Edge.
2007-08-01
ch 42,
abuseBesides the fact that the ending is really cheesy... the story was really good. Not only was it original, it was beautifully written. I think you did a great job and I really liked the story.
Gentle. Edge.
2007-08-01
ch 40,
abuse:)

I really don't know what to say so I'll just leave it at that. :)
Gentle. Edge.
2007-08-01
ch 32,
abuseI bet Cali's pregnant.
Gentle. Edge.
2007-08-01
ch 31,
abuseThat's pretty unexpected. Gideon and Christian brothers..
Gentle. Edge.
2007-08-01
ch 15,
abuseI guess that foils my 'get a boyfriend' plan...
Gentle. Edge.
2007-08-01
ch 12,
abuseHow could Micheal be Cali's legal husband if he and his family is illegal?
Gentle. Edge.
2007-08-01
ch 9,
abuseShe should get a boyfriend and claim that it helps keep everything undercover :P I would want to see Micheal's reaction to that.
Gentle. Edge.
2007-08-01
ch 6,
abuseMaking sense now :)
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