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| cue.dramatic.gasp. 2008-04-03 ch 7,  | abuseWow! (: Not bad. It's pretty good...I don't trust Eda either. I really like James and Delphine the most. You haven't updated in a couple years. -crosses fingers- update soon! it's sounds interesting... |
| asdf 2006-05-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis story is so many things - strangely beautiful, evocative, original, compelling, slow and sensual like the sea...I love it. Please, will there be an update anytime soon? I'm wishing for more, more. |
| loveology 2005-10-16 ch 7, | abuseUPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! |
| pixy-dizzy 2005-10-09 ch 7, | abuseMARRY ME! Ahem. Lol, kidding. I like this edge of darkness you're adding to Eda, and the way that Delphine seems to be--tries to be--an impartial observer. And I love Jackson. I don't know. I love the idea of injured characters, you know? Not blatantly, physically injured. Just these deep, beautiful, shadowy characters. Meh. Love this story. Update soon, please! |
| DuchessYappingDog 2005-10-07 ch 7, | abuseAh, drama. I can't wait to see what happens. I love it. Hahahaha. Not that I love destruction.. but I don't like Eda really. She really has no right to come back and think nothing is different. Sigh. |
| mauvais ide 2005-10-07 ch 7, | abusewow, a very powerful chapter, the subtleness and shades of this chapter, it's a masterpiece of words... |
| DeliciousAmbiguity 2005-10-07 ch 7, | abuseOoh. I do think that Eda is a trackster. I truely believe that James is right. Continue soon |
| C 2005-10-07 ch 7, anon. | abuseI want to marry you. Great pacing, great writing. |
| The Maverick Jester 2005-10-03 ch 6, | abuseHonest to god, I've been loving this story since the first chapter. It is just... Brilliant. The characters are more three dimensional andw ell-developed than just about any story I can think of. Their actions are perfect, and their interactions are unbelieveably interesting. here's hoping it doesn't take this long to pump out chp7! ;D |
| pixy-dizzy 2005-10-03 ch 6, | abuseAgh. Someday i want to be able to write like you. This is gorgeous. |
| DuchessYappingDog 2005-10-03 ch 6, | abuseOh. I think she has a semi-crush on Jackson! I mean, she would eventually, but you said "It wasn't her family, she told herself. Or her heart." Swoon. Hahahhaha. Not swoon per se, but :D I hope Eda doesn't ruin the semi-bond that Delphine and Jackson have. =] |
| mauvais ide 2005-10-03 ch 6, | abuseit's been forever. good chapter, tho the end was very sad... |
| tickle-me-pretty15 2005-07-21 ch 5, | abuseWHat your evil, evil i tell you lol. Wel updaate soon! ~tickles!` |
| vintagewhitegloves 2005-07-06 ch 5, | abuseAh, you updated :O) and you must do it again. I absolutely adore this story, it's just wonderful, and I'm glad you've continued. It's beautiful the way you've brought Eda home, with the smoke and such... can't wait to read more about it. |
| mauvais ide 2005-07-02 ch 5, | abusePOLENTA! i haven't had good fresh polenta since...forever it seems. awesome chapter though. |