hey, not bad, not bad at alli write stuff too- but only poetryif u wanna read it, check out my xanga...w.xanga.com/horsespirit626you'll find poems kinda all over, so be prepared to have to look for a ways...lolone thing i would do to this is eithera) make it a little longeror b) use more, u know, alliteration, more feeling, similes, metaphors, ya know?i really like it though

OMG I LOVE DRAGONS ^_^ This was really good, you wrote it well. Believable aswell ^_^Keep it up ^_^I luv it ^_^

Wow, I really like this one!

Nicely written scene here, with the dragon bounding away.

Oh! This is seriously intruiging. I liked it. I can really picture the dragon.

oo, great peice, dragons are such a good thing to write about, thank you for sharing