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| Kristen 2005-06-25 ch 1, anon. | abusehey, not bad, not bad at alli write stuff too- but only poetryif u wanna read it, check out my xanga...w.xanga.com/horsespirit626you'll find poems kinda all over, so be prepared to have to look for a ways...lolone thing i would do to this is eithera) make it a little longeror b) use more, u know, alliteration, more feeling, similes, metaphors, ya know?i really like it though |
| Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys 2005-06-06 ch 1,  | abuseOMG I LOVE DRAGONS ^_^ This was really good, you wrote it well. Believable aswell ^_^Keep it up ^_^I luv it ^_^ |
| Chicanery A. Beguile 2005-03-31 ch 1, | abuseWow, I really like this one! |
| nightdragon0 2005-02-10 ch 1, | abuseNicely written scene here, with the dragon bounding away. |
| Phoenix Lucy 2005-02-08 ch 1, | abuseOh! This is seriously intruiging. I liked it. I can really picture the dragon. |
| dustytiger 2005-02-08 ch 1, | abuseoo, great peice, dragons are such a good thing to write about, thank you for sharing |