Very nice imagery...i likes this alot...keep up the good work^_^ BTW...i finished the Ties That Bind Us...and am quite a way inhto the sequel if ur interested^_^ Keep up the good work and yer...^)^

We had to write one of these poems for English both in sixth and in eighth grade, and I have never seen anything like this. Most kids choose to write about tanglible objects...such as oranges (that was mine) or dresses or clouds or people. Most aren't creative enough to come up with an emotion and describe it perfectly. This is creative and different...this is purely and simply put...awesome.

Keep writing.

Later,

-Paige :-)

Wow, this is such an awesome poem!!