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| A Beautiful Nightmare 2006-01-25 ch 1,  | abuseThe last two lines were amazing... it really wrapped it up! Nothing to correct... everything was a great read! |
| Master Solo 2005-09-10 ch 1, | abuseNice. I already like this character. |
| Mithril-Moony 2005-08-19 ch 1, | abusevery dark and well...dark. but it's good though. |
| AAOTD 2005-05-21 ch 1, | abuseWow...it's really good. You captured the moment and the essence of the warrior well. ^_^ And thanks for your advice, I'll improve on my next chapter. But I really can't say anything that you need to improve on here. AAOTD |
| dustytiger 2005-04-11 ch 1, | abusewow! what a story! great work, keep it up, thank you for the review |