Great short story. It sums up what everyone feels at night. Thank you for posting it.

I really liked this..was it a one shot or is this just the prologue to a story? It'd make an interesting story though I don't know where you'd go with it...anyway...I really liked this, especially how you kept repeating that if she can't see them they can't see her or at least she couldn't see them...and the icy finger running down her spine was a great metaphor...I really felt chills when I read it..brilliant..keep writing!