thanks, i guess.don't judge a book by its cover tho: isn't it more important what's on the inside rather than how it looks on the outside?

if it's hard to read: good. there's too much mindless pap out there already with perfect spelling, grammar and punctuation. these things don't make or break a story, imho. look at "the celestine prophecy": it's so dry, near impossible to get thru and yet it was a best-selling book. cripes, what were they thinking!

i'm teasing, forgive me. but the world isn't a perfect place, and there's still alot of good stuff hiding under the covers. don't forget to take off your rose-coloured glasses now and then. let down your hair, look outside the box, and live life a little. it's not that scary.

See, THIS is easier to read. You should always write like this. Now we can see your pretty imagery no problem, and we aren't distracted by your lack of capitalization.