 JZ 2005-09-18 . chapter 1This was very hard to read, mostly due to the fact that you never bothered to spellcheck it or use any type of grammar known to man. This story is one long paragraph, you use apostrophes where you should be using quotation marks, and you're so lazy that you don't even use any form of capitalization!
Maybe you were under the misguided notion that you are using an original form of grammar, or you think you're such a good writer that you are not bound my the petty restraints of capitalization, but you are sadly mistaken.
If you had ever bothered to, at the very least, run a grammar check on this, this might be a fair story. Why do you burden us with trying to read through your laziness? It's very annoying. |