i find it ironic, then, that not only did you not hit the back button, but you actually read it, and not only that, read a few of them. ;)

i'm not one to talk in capitals, so why should i write them?

Look, all of your stories look exactly the same. It is boring. You are descriptive enough that you should be able to do better than this. People are going to take one look at your story and hit the "back" button, because it is so HARD TO READ. You almost have to squint to read them, and you are talented enough that you should be doing better than you are.

Your titles and summaries tell nothing about what happens inside. Few people even bother looking at them. This is only your fourteenth review so far--with twenty-three stories. If "macabre" is all you put down for a summary, chances are, few will read your stories. If you type in random numbers for every title, we can't tell one work from the other.

You can do better than this; you are not a bad writer by nature. You should be able to title each work, put a decent summary on it, and excercise correct capitalization. Someone should have told you this a long time ago.

thanks, i really appreciate your feedback :)

Wow...I've read a few of your proses and they are amazing! Brilliantly written and they flow so nicely...I especially liked the way you said the man looked up "as if the wind had called his name"...beautiful...keep writing!