Oh, okay, I needed to read through it again before I actually got it. Wonderful imagery you have here. I absolutely love it(and thanks for the reveiws)!

occident meets orientand takes in sweeping bowin lovely words of is old fashion,not old fashioned,and i love it love it love have this eververdant style.-kismet.

heey. pooh you can make even cny sound sad. humm. i kinda dont agree with your theme in general. yeah.

but i still like your writing.. hahass. esp the last stanza. the last four lines actually. quite interesting larh.

ooh father with babies on your lap huh.

reicheru!

hey, lazy to sign in.

this one's a bit deep your imagery isn't as clear as the previous few but it cloaks the poem with a slight air of mystery and gauzy unreality. it's a nice idea, chinese new year.

Heyhi, Pigsie! You're starting to sound like alotta of CAP poet frenz, haha...this must be a poet phase... :D, still VERY mature way or presenting your thoughts. You can really come through...bah, I would have said more positive things about this, except that I've read so much poetry recently it's been ozzing out my head. Maybe different's bad? :7