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| HideAwayFairy 2005-02-19 ch 1, | abuseOh, okay, I needed to read through it again before I actually got it. Wonderful imagery you have here. I absolutely love it(and thanks for the reveiws)! |
| negligible fictional force 2005-02-17 ch 1, | abuseoccident meets orientand takes in sweeping bowin lovely words of yours.this is old fashion,not old fashioned,and i love it love it love it.you have this eververdant style.-kismet. |
| reicheruuuuuu. 2005-02-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseheey. pooh you can make even cny sound sad. humm. i kinda dont agree with your theme in general. yeah. but i still like your writing.. hahass. esp the last stanza. the last four lines actually. quite interesting larh. ooh father with babies on your lap huh. reicheru! |
| omi 2005-02-12 ch 1, anon. | abusehey, lazy to sign in. this one's a bit deep >< your imagery isn't as clear as the previous few but it cloaks the poem with a slight air of mystery and gauzy unreality. it's a nice idea, chinese new year. |
| Leonines Ishiko Fauxville 2005-02-12 ch 1, | abuseHeyhi, Pigsie! You're starting to sound like alotta of CAP poet frenz, haha...this must be a poet phase... :D, still VERY mature way or presenting your thoughts. You can really come through...bah, I would have said more positive things about this, except that I've read so much poetry recently it's been ozzing out my head. Maybe different's bad? :7 |