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HideAwayFairy
2005-02-19
ch 1,
abuseOh, okay, I needed to read through it again before I actually got it. Wonderful imagery you have here. I absolutely love it(and thanks for the reveiws)!
negligible fictional force
2005-02-17
ch 1,
abuseoccident meets orientand takes in sweeping bowin lovely words of yours.this is old fashion,not old fashioned,and i love it love it love it.you have this eververdant style.-kismet.
reicheruuuuuu.
2005-02-15
ch 1, anon.
abuseheey. pooh you can make even cny sound sad. humm. i kinda dont agree with your theme in general. yeah.

but i still like your writing.. hahass. esp the last stanza. the last four lines actually. quite interesting larh.

ooh father with babies on your lap huh.

reicheru!
omi
2005-02-12
ch 1, anon.
abusehey, lazy to sign in.

this one's a bit deep >< your imagery isn't as clear as the previous few but it cloaks the poem with a slight air of mystery and gauzy unreality. it's a nice idea, chinese new year.
Leonines Ishiko Fauxville
2005-02-12
ch 1,
abuseHeyhi, Pigsie! You're starting to sound like alotta of CAP poet frenz, haha...this must be a poet phase... :D, still VERY mature way or presenting your thoughts. You can really come through...bah, I would have said more positive things about this, except that I've read so much poetry recently it's been ozzing out my head. Maybe different's bad? :7
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