Wow! That is a cool story. The characters are a bit confusing at first but I'm sure I will get it as the story progresses. Please give a little more detail on who and what people/dragons are though I think that will make it a bit easier for your readers. Good job.Happy writting.Jan.

Praise: I love the general idea. I am completely fascinatedand enraptured by stories concerning dragons and other mystical beasts. The title caught my eye, a bit Tolkienesque if you ask me. ;-)

Constructive Criticism: I found it a bit complicated and hard to follow. If you spend more time explaining things, then I know that I (personally) would enjoy reading it more.

Can't wait to see your further progress.

But I'm not quite sure what's going on... Too many names in too short of a chapter. But I like where its going;)

Wow, that's a really amazingly good plot (I saw that you reviews one of my stories and that was so nice that I had to read yours - oh I posted a new book under my penname. Please r/r). But that plot was seriously good and well planned out. Im not sure what will happen in the further chapters but I'll definately keep reading. I'm hoping that it will be the Drachors fighting hte Ankors and their evil dragons. But I doubt it because the dragons and the Drachors have become god-figures... oh, well thats still a great idea! I'm going to go read the next chapter! R/r my new book "Forest of Floods"!

Interesting. I can't wait for your next post.

very intresting story, but remember to make new paragraphs whenever you change speakers.