*whistles* Wow, oh wow... Crum that's deep, and broken. Wonderful poem...I'm gonna go think now...

I like ur 1st and 3rd stanza's the best. ^_^ By the way, I'm going to live with everyone back in prattville during the summer...so make room. lol

He's always the one who saves us. And how very sweet is His love.

First off, I like the way your first stanza and your last one tied in together, I loved the effect it gave. The way you described the person (My lover, my redemption..ect) was very well done. Anyways, this was very well written piece of poetry.

Whatever happened to female empowerment? Jokes aside, I think this is quite nice. Shows your desperation and your utter need for this person really well. Thumbs up.