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DOMOxKUN 2008-07-12 ch 2,	abuseJesus christ. This story is SO ** up but like in that twisted good way. Like, i LOVE Vic and he dies... that happens a lot in stories but it's messed up! :( I hate fictional stories... but I wish this was so Vic would come back -.- Please continue writing!
theapathycrusade 2008-05-20 ch 2,	abuseOh hell, I started crying at the end of this and I NEVER cry so...yeah. . I skipped to the end at first, because I really wanted it to be a 'happy' ending...and then the whole...he's dead. And , man, you're amazing! I can't stop reading your work. Someday I hope I can tackle issues that you can write about...you have a real talent for angst and romance and making it so...real. I'm in shock. And my eyes are watering and I feel like a sissy, lol. Thanks for such a great read.
Feel The Waltz 2008-04-24 ch 2,	abuseIf this wasns't such an amazing staory, i'd hate you for giving me a sad ending. :( I'm crying! sniff But i loved it
ode to a nightingale 2008-03-05 ch 2,	abuseI'm not crying - I feel too hollow to cry. There's this sick feeling in my stomach and this taste of bile in my mouth. This incredibly story has everything - I can't quite tell you how much I love it. Mike was an most of the time, that's true, but c'mon, he's only human, and when the love of your life is concerned, well, aren't you allowed to be selfish? I feel sorry for Joseph, I'm off at Terry and the rest and I hate and yet love that Victor commited suicide. It fits into the story. The ending is bittersweet, and I love bittersweet. I'm sure that if I ever get the courage to reread it, I'm going to bawl my eyes out. I did, however, find some tiny mistakes, mostly left-out words. Also, since I'm a perfectionist when it comes to punctation, the last line, no matter how heartbreaking and beautiful and freaking SAD it was, put me off: it should be "He was my lover, Victor." There shouldn't be a comma after 'was'. Or, you could've written, "He was my love, my Victor." Never mind, as I said, I'm a perfectionist, so, ignore me. The last line was heartbreaking, so, be proud!! :) To sum it all up, this is one heck of a story and I love it to death. Thanks for sharing it. :]
lavcea 2007-12-20 ch 2,	abuseokay. i have read this and it's 3:30 in the morning and i'm crying and i hate you because victor had to die and i love this story and it's in my favorites and i can't believe this one didn't have a happy ending and i want victor back and i want mike to be happy even though he was a bastard to joseph but i can understand his feelings when finally finding the love of his life an not being able to really help him the way he needed to be helped but loving him in a way he never knew he could be loved. i don't really hate you but this one really tore my heart out. great job - can you do a story where mike finds happiness even though i know he'll never find another like victor - mike deserves happiness. give him happiness - please. great job -L
caramel blazers 2007-10-28 ch 2,	abusethis is so sad. I hope that Mike gets back with Joseph later and finlly is happy. the first part of this story reminded me of '** as folk' but I guess whatever happened with victor was never going to turn out happily ever after. he was too screwed, probably from his prolonged abuse and really didn't want to save himself in the end because it was easier to give up. you cant really blame him, though cause I think the reason it didn't work out with Mike was he was too dependant upon him, Mike gave him everything and he didn't think of himself as being good enough for him. You really understand Mike, and I guess at the end Dane was right - their relationship was screwed. There was no balance of power, and in the end Victor just wanted the father that he never had. I hope you continue on this story, maybe a sequel?
mia5081 2007-07-08 ch 2,	abuseI'm not sure how to say how much I loved your story...other than the fact that you made me cry, and seeing as how the only movie/book I've ever cried for was The Notebook, well it's a big feat. Your characters had a lot of depth, and I can't help but feel bad for Joseph as well, since he really did seem to love Mikey. But more importantly, I thought Victor would actually return to him, even though I should have caught the signs with the depression. I would say update, but the story is finished, and if there was any more I'd probably create a puddle with the tears lol. I loved it =) ~mia
Swimmy 2007-05-14 ch 2,	abuseThe funny thing is, I always think I want the realistic ending. But goddamnit if I didn't just want them to ride off into the sunset together. There is so much to say, but honestly I'm not sure I can cope right now. You've made me quite the emotional wreck. Just, thank you for proving to me that this level of power is possible in literature.
slayerit 2007-01-17 ch 2, anon.	abuseI can't believe he's dead! Man... this was a great, original story. It was funny, insightful, and in the end tragic- thanks for writing it. It was wonderful.
Tackygeek 2007-01-02 ch 2,	abuseI'm literally sobbing right now, I hope you're happy. I love this story though. It's written so beautifully and the characters make you love them. To be honest though, I probably wouldn't have liked it as much as I do if I hadn't read Life, Continued, Will, and Bret and Michael first. I knew what happend, so I was kind of expecting it too. It's still sad at the end though, but it's nice to know Mikey's life gets better. I love him and I love Victor sobs Aw I love you and you're wonderful writting abilities, keep it up. Make me cry some more please!
Ayakaishi Fei 2006-11-24 ch 2,	abuseThis is so sad! It's 4:30 in the morning and I am bawling my eyes out. Vics mother should be stabbed - how could any mother treat her babies like that?! I'd rather die then let anything happen to one of my babies... Poor Mike! Poor Vic! Poor Joeseph! This was very stark, but very emotive too... I have no words...
Amy 2006-10-31 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis is the first story of yours that i've read (i'm gonna read the rest asap.) I just have to say that I think this is one of the most beautiful yet horribly sad stories i've ever read. I finished it about 2 days ago, but i can't stop thinking about your characters and feeling so bad for them. At work i had to tell my co-workers about it cuz they were wondering why i was so quiet and spacy. I know that sounds crazy but this story made me very emotional. every sad love song i hear on the radio, i think of mike and vic. wha =:( P.S. I'm american and i just think it's so cool to read about australian stuff. like how it's hot during x-mas? that's so weird! haha! and all your terminology. ;)
Kizuna 2006-09-08 ch 2,	abuseWhat a good story!!^^ And it was very sad… When Victor tried to commit suicide the first time… And when Mike and Charlene found him in the end… God, it was heart-breaking! I was crying… ^^ And I even knew what was going to happen! Well, I didn’t know how it happened, but I knew how it ended… So sad… Poor Mike… And poor Victor… Gosh, I really don’t know what to say, just that this is one of the best stories I’ve ever read!! I absolutely love the way you write!!^^ I don’t have much more to say, just that I will go and read your other stories!!^_^ It can take a while for me to read and review though, (especially those who you have put up all the chapter in one^^), because I am busy with school and stuff!^_^
Kizuna 2006-08-21 ch 1,	abuseHi! I have used three days reading this story, and I totally love it!!^^ It is so true to life and sweet and tragic!!^^ I will start reading the last part now, so I will write a longer review then!!^_^
Spawn of Hell 2006-07-25 ch 2,	abuseWell, that sure ended in an unexpected way. ill admit i was wondering what was the deal with the dead baby next to dead victor. can you say 'creepy'... Really, the baby in the freezer? it would be enough to traumatize anyone... I'd be curious to see how Michael would deal with all that **... seriously, victor was a bit cruel to make him and his sis find his corpse. if he wanted to leave an even more long-lasting impression on him, i think its rather well done. and i do feel for poor Joseph. he seemed like such a nice man. well, anyways, thanks for the read.

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