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Reviews For: In Amphora of Time

Macca Lane
2005-03-27
ch 1,
abusehaivng read more of your reviews of my work i would like to point out that what yo say you think of my work is not indispute however it has come to my attention that you were unable to work out that i was in fact trying to be ironic when saying it had taken me thhree days to write a hiaku also you would find that you have criticised me for using four lines when in fact one of tehm was th title.When you are inteligent at a young age (as oyu are) and a bit on the cocky side you naturally want to attract peoples attentions which isn't a bad thing i was like that at your age and having looked at reviews for your work it is obvius you have quite a penchnat for being blantatly honest about peoples work, so much so you remind me a bit of Simon Cowell. Ii considered using the same tone of harshness when reveiwing peoples works but i had decided against it and i thought this may prevent me from getting anyone to read my work however it appears you have rpoved me wrong and that being so harsh is a good way to get people to send reviews to you (as i've snet you a couple in response to your reviews) no hard feelings anyway, if you are feeling so uptight you really should trying wanking more if worked for me
Lain-the-kitty
2005-02-25
ch 1,
abuseMe: Hello. Thank you for that review. And I'm sorry for writing that "Chaos Garden Poem". I just love torture and dark things...and I know a few people are getting tired of it. (I'm just not interested in writing light stories...I'm lazy. Hahahahahahahahaha.)Well I'll try to make a lighter poem but sadly, evil Writers Block is taking over meh brain. I wished it's stops before my head goes Kaboom.

-My head explodes-

Ruby: I'm not cleaning it up... O.O
wordsworth in a garbage can
2005-02-10
ch 1,
abuseOh, wow. I've always been fascinated on some level with Bradbury's work, and I could see some of his inspiration in here. However, this poem was terrifically done. It was better than anything I could ever dream of writing. The details were so well painted, intricately done. Amazingly good work.
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