hey again, same review as the other 2 chapters, very painful deaths robocop feel to the story but you should have carried it on or at least continued to upload it, so keep at it :D!

hey again, wow this continues to be a great story but still something must have happened to make you kill them off like this, and i'm starting to get a major robocop feel to this story keep at it!

hey, ok can i say as i'm normal, oww!! oh my word what must have been going through your head as you killed them off?? poor guys i can see the deaths too which is worse, but still a cool story though keep at it!! :D