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Nobody-n-Particular 2005-04-19 . chapter 1
Echoes tend to get on my nerves too... ;)
Niongi 2005-04-03 . chapter 1
*shivers,"nice, for a moment i thought it would be about animals...because my cat's name is Echo...but yea anywho!! I like the way you brought out that bit of darkness, made me shiver (or was that the A/C lol thank you for the beautiful poem
PirateGrrl 2005-04-02 . chapter 1
Very powerful! I think I've said this to someone before (doesn't mean I don't mean it with this as well), I normally don't go for rhymed poetry, but this was so fantastically done. The emotion is something tangible, something that the reader can genuinely feel and the rhyme just makes it all the more deep. Well written.
youzi 2005-03-30 . chapter 1
Great piece! loved the lines 'tainted hollows of my soul' and how you did the evil '(rippling) out of (your) skin' thing..chilling! Keep writing =D
AllyCred 2005-03-28 . chapter 1
i love it the way you talk about the echo...simply amazing...i love it...so beautiful...you have great talent. lots of love ~AllyCred~
Otisfrimpa 2005-02-19 . chapter 1
Wow. This is amazing. I love everything about, and would not change a thing. The rythm and flow is excellent, the description is great.Keep writing!~K~P.S. Thank you so much for reviewing my stuff. (I'm sure if you look around you could find something like POTP... Or you could even start your own!) Please R&R some more and I'll do the same! :)
catseyeview 2005-02-19 . chapter 1
Almost like an exorcism- I love the feel of this echoe within and rippling out your skin! Great work! - And thanks for my review!-Christine R.
drippingdreams 2005-02-15 . chapter 1
Whoa... I could almost hear a deep drumbeat as I was reading this. Great rhythm, good word choice. "hover at the brink of life"... wow!
megansafteryou 2005-02-12 . chapter 1
I used to be able to right poetry like that. Now all of my poems are dreadful.
breezy nostrils 2005-02-11 . chapter 1
It flowed very nicely...great job!
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