|Reviews for Weigh Perfection|
| FrozenKiwi 8/4/05 . chapter 1
Seriously? Brilliant. The numbers countdown sort of thing absolutely made the poem. Superbly done!
| pleasecometrue 7/21/05 . chapter 1
Interesting format, it's absolutly wonderful.
| Guest 7/21/05 . chapter 1
wow this sort of reminds me of me.
| kit feral 5/22/05 . chapter 1
-shudder- That was creepy. But still excellent. The short lines really worked well. Great work, keep it up!
| chocoholic 4/26/05 . chapter 1
Wow, I thought that was excellent. The hard sounds and short lines work well for the subject, and I thought the last two lines were a very effective ending. I like it! (I also like reveiws, thanks for them by the way! :-))
| something agaisnt you 4/6/05 . chapter 1
This poem really is fantastic, I love how it flows so beautifully but tells such a distressing message. The way it ends in hope when the reader knows she is actually destroying herself is a really interesting twist. Well done.
| myno 3/31/05 . chapter 1
but you know? You never do reach perfection. This is, again, a captivatingly interesting poem, with the unusual format and all.
| amphiboly 3/3/05 . chapter 1
this is really good stuff. its very maths-y yet very real. ((:
| addie pray 2/25/05 . chapter 1
That's really all I can offer, sorry.
On favorites list.
| darkmistresslae 2/15/05 . chapter 1
nice! I really like it! again, scary and haunting... but it's truely excellent. oh, I like your penname too... thought I'd say that.
| Aslan Israel 2/11/05 . chapter 1
I love the style you used in this. Very powerful. Great job.
| smile persephone 2/10/05 . chapter 1
Something about that was (strangely) sexy. Lovly portrayal of someone going through this. Well done!