Seriously? Brilliant. The numbers countdown sort of thing absolutely made the poem. Superbly done!

Interesting format, it's absolutly wonderful.

wow this sort of reminds me of me.

-shudder- That was creepy. But still excellent. The short lines really worked well. Great work, keep it up!

Wow, I thought that was excellent. The hard sounds and short lines work well for the subject, and I thought the last two lines were a very effective ending. I like it! (I also like reveiws, thanks for them by the way! :-))

This poem really is fantastic, I love how it flows so beautifully but tells such a distressing message. The way it ends in hope when the reader knows she is actually destroying herself is a really interesting twist. Well done.

but you know? You never do reach perfection. This is, again, a captivatingly interesting poem, with the unusual format and all.

this is really good stuff. its very maths-y yet very real. ((:

Bloody Hell.

That's really all I can offer, sorry.

Bloody Hell.

On favorites list.

nice! I really like it! again, scary and haunting... but it's truely excellent. oh, I like your penname too... thought I'd say that.

I love the style you used in this. Very powerful. Great job.

Something about that was (strangely) sexy. Lovly portrayal of someone going through this. Well done!