'ello. Short and sweet, liking the conciseness although I think if you'd given the begining and the lead up more of an explaination (exactly why the books went up in flames why he couldn't get the fire out etc) it would have been better. And I'm not sure the word hospital fits in a story that has a medevil type atmosphere...it's a modern word or it sounds modern anyway.

Poetic justice, well I think the fire thing may be a little...literal with the whole what goes around comes around thing. But it's a nice short story, very descriptive.

hmm. a nice, moral story.