Reviews for The Darkness Consumes & The Light Saves

Darlingdeath 2005-03-19 ch 1,	abuseOh, I like it. The darkness is described using almost beautiful imagry... just one question, 'bout the tenth line it says "The hope in side" should not "in side" be one word, as in inside... I hope I'm not being too critical, but the small mistake caught my attention. But again you write superbly!
avani.neglect 2005-02-10 ch 1,	abuseI disagree with you...poems can be summarized, people do it all the time. A summary doesn't necessarily have to tell someone what the poem is about, but rather under what circumstances you wrote the poem, or how you were feeling. As for the poem itself, you have some good word choice but the entire idea of light and dark is too archetypal and too overused to be seen as original.