This story is so incredibly affecting. The tenderness, the lust, the jealousy,the hopeless longing, even the slightly bittersweet ending, (its not happily ever after, afterall), all are just beautiful.

Damn, I loved this. Definitely on my favs list. It reminds me of Josh so much... it brings the envy out of me. I liked it, keep up the good work! Also, it reminds me a lot of me sometimes.

That was a very erotic piece. Perfect in its intensity. I loved it!

Wow...this was great. I love your style of writing. I liked...well everything...especially the ending. Keep up the great work! _

I love it.

And people suck. Entirely. (The fangirl incident.)

Sasa

wow, that was beautiful. i loved it! especially the end - that was wonderfully written. too bad this is a one-shot, but i hope you post more stories soon!

and i'm really sad to hear what happenned with Inevitably. That was one of my most favortite stories on . i loved your humor in that story. maybe you could write another story that's similar?

This reminds me of when I was 18 and my workmate and love-object of several months came into work and asked me 'am I walking funny?' Only he didn't kiss me. He only told me I was a space-cadet and gave me graphic details when I replied 'no, why?' (after checking out his bum to see if he *was* walking funny, mind you). Oh the agony. Poor Mitchell. I'm jealous because he got kissed. Hmph. So for that reason I find this to be painful, and yet hilarious.

I'm sad about 'Inevitably'. I really liked that and reading male slash writer's work is helpful if you're female and worried about creating characters that are supposedly male and yet teeter on becoming a touch too estrogenically-charged.

Oh, and BTW, until you posted your profile - which was after you started writing Inevitably - I thought you were a lesbian. I have no idea why. I don't know why I needed to share that information.

I'll leave you alone now.