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Purple Honeydew
2005-03-20
ch 12,
abuseWow. I read all of these poems...the imagery is so gorgeous.

You guys make a great collaboration! Keep up the amazing work!
Manuel Fajar
2005-02-12
ch 2,
abusestrange to see words,

you inspired & i wrote down,

(i inspired & you wrote down)

flowing cross the page;

better yet to see ying-yang,

bouncing up & down time's waves.
Manuel Fajar
2005-02-11
ch 6,
abusei like be in even,

4 life's sometimes so od,

abandonin all prime's,

probabli the best thing,

never more to be 1.

p.s. i lik how u made me even and you odd, but i thought i was odd 2. manuel
smile persephone
2005-02-11
ch 8,
abuseThese are all breathtaking poems! Such a wonderful subject to take them from, too! Lovely!
Aslan Israel
2005-02-11
ch 8,
abuseWow. Wonderful collection you got here. Perfect in everyway. Brava.
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