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| Twilight Starr 2008-03-24 ch 1,  | abuseCute story. It was an enjoyable read. Good luck with writing, this story, and life. Have a fantastic day. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| pceluvnchclte 2007-11-28 ch 1, | abuseaw... this has to be my favorite oneshot of all time. usually i don't really enjoy reading oneshots (i don't know why), but yours caught my attention. i loved how you didn't give them names. for some reason i feel a better connection to the characters when they don't have names. i especially liked the letter exchanging between them. not many oneshots have that kind of idea. it was nice to read something different. great beginning & ending, both of which are hard to achieve. |
| ess3sandra 2007-09-21 ch 1, | abusedamn, that was utterly romatic and oh so lovelie. |
| yarrowicefrost 2007-09-09 ch 1, | abuseThere were so many things that made me go 'Aw' in this one-shot, I really don't know where to start. Suffice to say, I really enjoyed reading it. Cheers! :d |
| Kjersti (aurora borealis1) 2007-08-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhat does it say about this story when I end up reading it *three times*? It's just great. I adore it. It's incredibly sweet and well written. Cudos to you. :) |
| Saphimire Karishnikova 2007-08-16 ch 1, | abuse.. Why are there two eighth times? It doesn't really matter though, because the story is AWESOME! Loved it~~ ^_^ |
| aurora borealis 2007-06-12 ch 1, | abuseThis is such a sweet story. I've actually read it once before, but couldn't remember if I reviewed it or not, and then I just had to read it again... It's so cute. I love it. :) |
| brittle hearts 2007-06-08 ch 1, | abuseSo beautiful. |
| JojoAnn 2007-05-08 ch 1, | abuseThis reminds me of my crush and I, except I'm not wiccan... and neither is he. But the joking and the chemistry between them. I had tears in my eyes but I didn't unleash them, because my family is near. I loved this so much, and it's going on my favorites list where I can read it over and over again. Thank you for writing it. |
| canDii-aPpLe 2007-04-14 ch 1, | abuse*squeals loudly* OMG THAT WAS SO SWEET! *sigh* so sweet...i love happy endings!! ^^ |
| inkling 2007-04-10 ch 1, anon. | abusethis story is so beautifully written & unique. one thing though- there were eleven times, not ten. you used "the eighth time" twice. |
| jammi 2007-03-26 ch 1, | abuseI love the writing style this had and from the beginning it had me smiling. -sque- sorry, it's just so not fluffy but yet it brings out the fangirl in me if you know what I mean, lol, I'm just grinning because it's just so -insert word here-! I think this is one of my favourite one-shots, and normally I don't like oneshots since you don't really get to know the main characters or the outcome but you managed that with ten conversations. |
| .tearsofthefallen. 2007-02-23 ch 1, | abuseThat is one of the awesomest(is that even a word?) stories I've ever read! Great job! |
| wandless 2007-02-08 ch 1, | abuseThat was really nice! |
| Melika Elena 2007-01-13 ch 1, | abuseCute, original, and oddly not cliche at all. Great job. |