I really liked the last two lines, and the way you put a question mark after 'silence at last'. In the second line, you might want to put a hyphen between 'throat' and 'clenching' (that line provokes a powerful image, by the way). Also, one line read 'praise forma man he's never met' and I believe you meant 'from a'.

As a whole, the poem delivered a clear message but the flow was disrupted by a few distracting lines. With a little bit of revision, this poem would be excellent! Good job (and thanks for the reviews).

Beautiful, the last lines hit the hardest and left me with a melancholy feeling. Your writing is always amazing. I hope you are doing something with it; talent like yours shouldn't be wasted.

~Dusty