It wasn't that bad. Really, it wasn't. Please r&r more of my stories.::sniffle::i think everyones's ignoring me. :)

this bad? dude i really liked this..it was awesome!

I disagree...I thought the poem was a really good narrative...keep on going!

This is my favorite :) *sigh* Ryan...yeah I'm a moron.

I thought it was good (I've never really thought of using different points of view in poetry that's a cool idea-i only did it in books and I kind of got out of that habit.

Awesome :) I find no flaws!