"Once I get close you allow me to fall, each fall makes getting back up harder" - these lines are a brilliant way to say that emotion, I can relate to it because I feel it everyday.

"I look around and I see life, a life that I cannot have" - again I can relate; feeling this everyday.

Those lines inparticular caught my attention. This poem all round though, is truly amazing. Great job with this one.

I like how you wrote this- but.. Jus' don't sit back.. Thats no the way to do it! Might be scared, but you have to face the fears at some point!(Thanks for the review)

I really liked this poem. It fits exactly how I feel right now. Keep up the great work.

"Once I get close you allow me to fallEach fall makes getting back up harder"

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So true. Very eloquently written. Nice job.

wow, powerful poem there, it describes how i sometimes feel about others, keep up the good work!

Dude, I can really relate. I always have some people who I think are my friends and they just abandon me. It hate it.

it was goodkeep writing :)

once again, very nice job