Beautiful and profoundly deep...the imagery is amazing...wonderful piece. The similes were very unique and I could relate to this. Wonderful piece.

P.S. I feel for your loss *hugs* Just remember that the memories will keep you going. Keep writing, it helps heal.

Wow! This was a great poem with a powerful description. Very good! Oh THANKS SO much for the info on the Haiku style you gave me! I now know what to do!

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Rejection is a powerful emotion and you capture it perfectly.

Rocky :)

I know how rejection feels. I hate it. It kills you slowly inside. Love the poem and how it is set up.

Princess