I see what your talking about in this poem. I've wished I could do the same for a long time now. You're an amazing poet. I'm glad I found your poem.

wow, you sound like jesus. and you're right, you do need to change the french _;. i like the thought, very compassionate, yet the desire to make the pain your own adds a dark air to it. nice blend of yin and yang.

wow... just wow... that was amazing...-teary eyed-