 agirlnamed-aly 2005-11-25 . chapter 1Wow. This was beautiful.
The best part was that you made it so personal. My favorite lines were:
"I feel gross. Not the deodorant-has-run-out-and-I-still-have-two-classes-to-go kind, but the my-insides-feel-moldy gross."
And
"But you were there. You would ask me if I had a boyfriend, and if he was cute.You used to dance, but married a man with two left feet."
It was depressing - but I really liked it. |