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Reviews For: Are We Out of Orbit?
ItMustBeLove 2007-05-03 . chapter 1
I like this a lot. It's like, uber depressing yet honest and even somewhat funny ^ ^
agirlnamed-aly 2005-11-25 . chapter 1
Wow. This was beautiful.

The best part was that you made it so personal. My favorite lines were:

"I feel gross. Not the deodorant-has-run-out-and-I-still-have-two-classes-to-go kind, but the my-insides-feel-moldy gross."

And

"But you were there. You would ask me if I had a boyfriend, and if he was cute.You used to dance, but married a man with two left feet."

It was depressing - but I really liked it.
Ashley Arsenic 2005-03-26 . chapter 1
I recently lost my gre-grandmother as well. Though it seems that you were closer to yours. It hurts though, knowing that things wont be the same again. I liked this a lot.
Aslan Israel 2005-02-11 . chapter 1
Very lighthearted, dispite your obvious loss. Sweet rememberance. Brava.
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