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Reviews For: Each Glistening Shard

Starknight
2005-02-20
ch 1,
It's the new story... that's cool. I'll keep my mouth shut as far as commenting on it goes. Afterall we talked about this part already, and since aparently I'm a little harsh (sorry!) when it comes to kritiking I'll wait until it's longer :) .
ice flyer
2005-02-12
ch 1,
Your writing is really good. This chapter didn't give much plot info, but I'll be sure to read on. Good job.
bluewaves64
2005-02-12
ch 1,
This chapter didn't really say much, but i guess that's because this is still the first chapter. I liked the way you described things... you use good vocab too... Keep up the good work! Update soon!
NoraVampira
2005-02-11
ch 1,
That grabbed my attention. I like this piece. Hope to see more soon.
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