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| Starknight 2005-02-20 ch 1, | It's the new story... that's cool. I'll keep my mouth shut as far as commenting on it goes. Afterall we talked about this part already, and since aparently I'm a little harsh (sorry!) when it comes to kritiking I'll wait until it's longer :) . |
| ice flyer 2005-02-12 ch 1, | Your writing is really good. This chapter didn't give much plot info, but I'll be sure to read on. Good job. |
| bluewaves64 2005-02-12 ch 1, | This chapter didn't really say much, but i guess that's because this is still the first chapter. I liked the way you described things... you use good vocab too... Keep up the good work! Update soon! |
| NoraVampira 2005-02-11 ch 1, | That grabbed my attention. I like this piece. Hope to see more soon. |