*dies* The ending, really had me going. The despiration in the tone, the sadness and emotion is breathtaking in this and done really well. A beautiful story that I can't wait to see unravel.
Beautiful, really gripping and attention grabbing. I love the writing, its so clear and unique and has this feel about it. ^__^ I can't explain all too well what it is, but I can assure you it is something that you shouldn't worry about. The whole thing, from characterization to descriptions are amazing and flawless as I can see. ^__^ I am addicted to this.
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