i like this a lot. i can relate to it muchly. nice choice of words and nice floe throughout. i also like the way it seems to wrap up nicely at the end. great job!

That's a beautiful poem!

I really love this poem, it almost has a song-like quality to it. Usually, I'm not partial to rhyming poems, but you really made it work well. Congrats! Keep up the good work! Always be yourself! -Nuclear Red