 maxnotevoltage 2005-10-14 . chapter 1WOW... That is... unique? clever? Yes, I think that's the word I'm looking for... Hahaha... You're too funny! -- J.max
p.s. Your censored bio cracks me up.:-B |
 Gilee7 2005-06-11 . chapter 1This is interesting to say the least. It definately make sense, and it makes you think. A very true analogy. It's so short though. It doesn't even seem like this should be on here. You should have worked it into some story or something. |
 Arkash 2005-06-02 . chapter 1Hilarious, if short. Happens to be true, as well. *_* |
 Safety Canary 2005-05-29 . chapter 1It's an interesting analogy. Granted, not one I've ever thought about... but yeah, I mean, I can definitely see us as... an omelette. |
 His Only 2005-05-16 . chapter 1Hahaha! Aww, this was so cute. Your metophors were great and maybe a little random. But hey, randomness is awsome! I really loved your first two sentances as well as your last... as the whole, this was very thought provoking and very true! Amazing work and keep it up!
Oh ya, and thanks a bunches for reviewing my story. I WAS SO HONORED! I know it's not the best; ok so it kinda stinks, but reviews really help to improve my writing. So yeah, I really did appreciate it. Thanks again! |
 Morbane 2005-04-22 . chapter 1It's a bit short. What about the pepper?!= And the awfulness of what happens when there is too much cheese?! |
 kjashe(kay) 2005-04-04 . chapter 1 hi! me here. i wanted to thank you for your review it made me VERY VERY REALLY happy. :-) so thanks and keep reading and writing!! buh bye!
-k |
 sweetxinsincerity 2005-03-27 . chapter 1haha it's the great Omelet of Life. very interesting, i like it. i wonder if i'm extraordinary enough to be like a mushroom or a piece of sausage. lol it's funny but at the same time it makes sense. nice job! |
 kt in the sky 2005-03-13 . chapter 1woa. at first i was like... 'dude...what is wrong w/ this person?' then i was like 'wow! that like totally awesome dude!' *bods head* lol just kidding. this is funny as well as full of a lot of meaning. sorta. but i love it. :-D oh and in respond to the watermelon you threw at me...
*a pickle appears out of no where and starts hurtling toward you a an incredible speed times infinite* you are'nt the only one with telelcenetic powers. *cackes evilly* *couhg cough* er... yeah...
keep writing!later!
-kay |
 fantasy-star 2005-03-01 . chapter 1This is a new way of looking at life...And its pretty funny too. You certainly caught my eye on this one. |
 Midnight Proc 2005-02-20 . chapter 1... *blinks* So we all make the great Omelet of Life. That's certainly an interesting spin.
Seriously, this was a cool little ditty, although a part bothered me. You said that eggs are completely devoid of any distinguishing feature, and then go on to say that some are brown, some are white... The statement strikes me as a half-truth, since you can distinguish the white from the brown. The ditty would probably suffer if you revise those lines, but... *tugs at hair* I have a feeling my brain is backward today. I can't think. Must be from all of the Windex and 401 fumes...
*pauses* Does that mean that the egg came before the chicken? |
 Chole Asterion 2005-02-15 . chapter 1I laugh, I laugh hard. Then I think. |
 Squirrelmistress 2005-02-15 . chapter 1This = brilliant. |
 slave to the voices 2005-02-13 . chapter 1That was odd, but mostly in an odd way. Oddly enough, I found it amusing. Nice work.
**Slave** |
 Heide DeVries 2005-02-11 . chapter 1Omelet wisdom? Interesting take on individuality. |